A Great poem from your heart. 5/5

The emotion flowed very well. Very great writing!!!

"That the passion between us
Was making me feel like a hostage"

An absolutely beautiful line right here. I really loved this poem, I think it really shows your immense talent. The only suggestion I have is to maybe be more vague at the end, because the ending "even though you have died" sounds so abrupt. Just a minor note though, 5/5

This was such a sad emotional piece. The dedication at the bottom really hit hard i'm sorry or your loss. This was a beautiful piece and i'm sure he would of been proud of you writing something ever so deep and powerful. Well done. ~Mel

Incredible sad.. :(

So much emotion, so descriptive, a very well penned poem.

Really sad though :(

OMG... this poem is so sad very well written but so sad....

Im speachless. it was a great poem and the ending caught me way off gaurd. I'm sorry this had to happen to you. the flow is perfect, the rythm is perfect, the emotion gave me goose bumps. all tree of these are now on my favorites list 10/5

Again another great poem i love part 1 2 and three keep up the good work 5/5

Again the emotion was good nice ending to a series wonderful job

That was so emotional i read all three parts good job! Im sorry you lost him. Its always very difficult to lose a loved one! 5/5

I'm so sorry for your loss. It's heartbreaking. I like how you've put your sorrow into your writing, and produced a wonderful set of poems.

Well done.

R.I.P., NOW I HAVE HER!