Lonesome

by Jenni   Nov 6, 2007


And it was bleeding on the bathroom floor,
that you decided not to take it anymore.
You looked down into my hazel eyes
and said you wouldn't save me next time.
You said you could not wait and see
when a beautiful girl was finally happy.
You said it was a waste of time and space,
to turn me into a different face.
So instead of staying, you just left,
and left my heart completely bereft.
There's nothing left for me to do,
but cut my everything in two.
So it's back to bleeding on the bathroom floor,
where no one was able to save me once more.
The blood it shines in my hazel eyes
sucking out the last of life.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Ariana Mejia

    This was a really touchy poem...you have a great choice with words..5/5!!!great job..

  • 17 years ago

    by shadowcat

    Wow. This was very nice.
    I enjoyed reading it.
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Pete

    A really well written piece, I don't particularly enjoy reading the self harm / suicide poems so much. Although in this piece you don't make it brazen, you hint at it several times but only actually mention it once. (Strangley enough, that once is my favourite line)

    Really dark poem, full of despair and doubt.

    "There's nothing left for me to do,
    but cut my everything in two."

    Great lines.

    Nice work.

    ~Pete.

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