A really well written piece, I don't particularly enjoy reading the self harm / suicide poems so much. Although in this piece you don't make it brazen, you hint at it several times but only actually mention it once. (Strangley enough, that once is my favourite line)

Really dark poem, full of despair and doubt.

"There's nothing left for me to do,
but cut my everything in two."

Great lines.

Nice work.

~Pete.

Wow. This was very nice.
I enjoyed reading it.
5/5

This was a really touchy poem...you have a great choice with words..5/5!!!great job..