Dancing in the Rain (short)

Good work so far. Keep it up.

Haven't we danced in the rain together before????LOL Good work...just add a little more um...rain...LOL

I love it how it is, its very beautiful. It expresses how nature doesn't care what you've done or what you're going to do, it will always forgive you and give you a new chance. Keep up the good work. ^_^ *5/5*

I think you should say "Let's go dance in the rain" but decide yourself...
The meaning is nice and it's a little sad. Let's dance in the rain because it's the only thing that can cure our pain...5/5

Hey i have a suggestion wat about

Lets go out dancing in the rain
Lets wash away all our troubles
and pour out the pain

let me know wat u think thanks