Thi is sooo beautiful ..I really like it .very emotional and very reall .5/5 keep up the good work

This piece is filled with overwhelming sadness. You expressed your emotions greatly. Whole poem is very touching and it flows flawlessly.
My favorite stanza is:

- I'm drowning here
within the ashes of my childhood
I hit the ground when I fly
my whole life, misunderstood-
^^
Great start, it pulled me straight into the piece.

5/5 from me