Very good write. I liked the last stanza the most for some reason tho. Good job 5/5

PaSsIoNaTe kIsSeS

It was good, but it felt very sad at the same time. 5/5

Oh my gosh! That was really good. I'm sure all of us on here can relate. You're really talented. I loved everything about it. Keep writing!

Cayce

Wow, this is very emotional and it is about the truth of your heart. I really love the people who could really express what's in their heart!!! It is 5/5 wonderful job!!!

I really enjoyed reading this poem as I can totally relate to it. Sometimes I read things I write and think "wow, am I really this depressing?" We all need a way to vent our darkest thoughts and if poetry is the way to do it then go for it! God knows there are far worse ways for people to express their emotions. The flow of this poem was pretty good, and the last line was very effective, drawing me in and making me consider everything you've written. Very clever!!!