It is good, but there was some grammatical errors. The flow was nice. Great job with this one. 5/5

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This poem was nice. I'm not sure I like the structure though. It's too much spaces for me. I loved your word choice though and the flow was flawless.

Keep it up && Take Care!

-Shannon <3

The grammer here could be better. The structure of the whole thing is a little confusing and the choosing of words broke the flow a little. The subject is something many can relate too. Overall 4/5

I think we all have times where we stop and look to see what direction we'll choose, it's important to have some idea of where we want to go in life. But I believe in destiny and that all roads no matter how long or winding will take us to the place we're meant to be - Home. Excelent job 5/5 GG23

I really love poem about life, the poems here are usually talking about love. I love your writing, this is one of your best... A bit confusion here but I can relate in the most of its lines!!! Another your 5/5 job!!!

I wanted to go a certain way;

I don't need to be this way!

I think you should change on of the endings so they both don't end in "way" otherwise I liked it :)

Everyone has come to a time in there life were they were faced with doors but fear did not let them know which one was the best one for them to open. I think you did a great job described the uncertainty and doubt one feels in this postition. Well done *5/5*

Very good
although for this line
"Its just like I'm sat staring;"
to me it would sound better as
"I'm just sitting here, staring;"

just my thoughts.
5/5

Wowo, very long, ahah.

But anywayss.,, i love it!
I'll tell you,
you are probably one of my favorite writers =D.
I give it 5.
Great Job!!!
Dollface.

This is really great!!!!!! i love the message it seems that i feel this way most of the time,, 5/5 its a perfect kind of poetry, very well express