A Black Angel

by cowgirlstar26   Nov 6, 2007


Rainclouds dance above the graves
darkness broods among each stone
black rose petals hit the ground
she's not afraid that she's alone

tears trickling down her pale face
blood stained feathers casted down
bruises lay upon her delicate figure
she screams, but there's no sound

her black eyes so lifeless
remaining in eternal agony
condemned to be in the place
immortal, left to bleed

fog sets in at night
as she walks the yard
singing the dead to sleep
looking for a single star

watching over me
she'll remain here forever
unlocking all the secrets
to a life torn and scattered

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    I really liked the images in this poem. They kept me wanting to read more but the only thing I wished the story line waas abit more detailed other then that it was a good read Plot121

  • 16 years ago

    by timothy cadwell

    You know i have a veary darkend life.
    but id do any thing to add light to yours.
    just having you as a friend means alot to me. i know our wounds are not the same but
    thare simaler. if you need some one to talk to you know my nuber. and if you like it or not im gana bug you as much as i can :-P

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is amazing from the first to the last line. The imagery that you created in every stanza is truly breathtaking and vivid- your descriptions made superb atmosphere.
    My favorite stanza is:

    - tears trickling down her pale face
    blood stained feathers casted down
    bruises lay upon her delicate figure
    she screams, but there's no sound-
    ^^
    Very vivid and effective.

    5/5 from me

  • 16 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Another amazing write. I love your word choice. The flow was excellent. Wonderful write, but yet again it lacks puncuation.

    Peace, Joe

  • 17 years ago

    by Liz

    I loved how this started off. The last couple stanzas weren't as strong as the beginning onces. But a really beautiful poem indeed! I enjoyed the read. Keep writing!!! 5/5

    ` Liz =]

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