by cowgirlstar26 Nov 6, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
Rainclouds dance above the graves |
by Robert
I really liked the images in this poem. They kept me wanting to read more but the only thing I wished the story line waas abit more detailed other then that it was a good read Plot121 |
You know i have a veary darkend life. |
This is amazing from the first to the last line. The imagery that you created in every stanza is truly breathtaking and vivid- your descriptions made superb atmosphere. |
Another amazing write. I love your word choice. The flow was excellent. Wonderful write, but yet again it lacks puncuation. |
by Liz
I loved how this started off. The last couple stanzas weren't as strong as the beginning onces. But a really beautiful poem indeed! I enjoyed the read. Keep writing!!! 5/5 |