This gave me cold chills.. =[

I lost my Daddy recently, too.

This is beautiful, and I wish you the best.

Best Wishes
Deepest sympathy.

Your dad would be so proud of your writing and you yourself... keep it up

5/5

Danielle
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I'm so sorry.
I know thats not all you need is sorry's but thats all I can give you from here.
amazing poem.

Aww. this is so sad. now i feel bad for not bein around my dad. its not my fault but still... this is REALLY good. keep it up.

oh oh. btw. this part:
<me hero, my heart, my best friend in life>
did you make it me instead of my on purpose?

That was really really touching, i've never had to ecperience losing my daddy, so i don't no what to say, you wrote that so beautiful, and i'm sure he would be proud of you :]