I like ths. the topic was intresting. my fav lines r.. |
by Jenni Marie
This is so beautiful. |
Wow, very good poem. I love it. It's short, but full of emotion. Definately on my favs. 5/5 |
by Pete
Simply wonderful! |
Once again, I really like your haiku's. I've tried to no avail. |
Wow. Beautiful haiku, this one is for sure a wonder. 5/5 |
Pretty. I love haikus : ) |
Haikus are great to read and the fact that you did three and made them match so beautifully |
WOW! Simply wonderful and -oh- so colorful poetry gem, your writing here is fascinating, and I found something haunting in priceless beauty which you described. I admire your thoughts. I can not write Haikus, once I could, but not anymore, but I can deeply and strongly relate with beauty that you painted, greatly, which is more important! |
by Formidable Muse
This is very lovely. 5/5 |
by NobodyKnowsItButMe
I like the imagery! Good piece of poetry! |
Great piece my friend! |