Goodbye

by That One Girl   Nov 6, 2007


There is something I have to say
That I've been thinking about day after day
Even though it hurts to tell you this
I'm tired of being dissed
I'm trying to hold myself together
I wanted to be with you forever
But when I stepped back to take a look
I realizied shes the one whose got you hooked
I guess its time to say goodbye
I'll try really hard not to cry
I'm tired of the pain
I'm done with there being nothing left to gain
I cant stand my heart breaking
every time I breathe
I'm sick of you not loving me
So im giving up hope
Actually I'm strong enough to let go
I just wanted you to know
About the pain I feel inside
It was all a lie
So I guess this is goodbye

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Their is no pain you can feelmore then love somone that dont love you

    it was pretty brave of you to take taht decision , a lot of pepole jsut dont see it , and dotn see that it hurt more to stay then to let go ,

    good one
    keep the hope , and heal the wounds

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    This was so sad yet it was quite beautiful at the same time. a very hearfelt poem. it's neve easy saying goodbye.

    I cant stand my heart breaking
    every time I breathe

    i really like those lines, they were touching. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by GANGSTA MAMi

    This is a gud poem gurl nd itz happening 2 me rite now so im really feelin it.

  • 16 years ago

    by waiting 4 some1

    Wonderful poem and sad.
    be strong and you will find your true man one day

  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    That was wondeful poem it rhymed a lot and it made a lot of sense and nice flow
    loved the poem .this one is going to my faves poem

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