by Jenni Marie
Oh gosh...This is just beautiful! i don't even know what i could say that would begin to sum up how i feel about this. this...This is just amazing. so much depth and emotion that shines through the written words and is so easily felt by the reader, mixed with beautiful imagery and fantastic flow throughout makes for such a wonderful read. :) i'm glad you are back writing again, and i hope you're doing okay. |
I've read a couple of love poems and this is one of those poems that I really love. It flowed very nice and the rhyming was just amazing. Great poem. Going on my favs. 5/5 |
by Melpomene
Why is this voted 3.3!? What the... People are obviously down voting or do not know beautiful poetry when they read it. I loved this poem so much. It definitly is a favorite that I have read of yours. You write love poetry so beautifully. Something I do quite badly to tell you the truth. The word choice I loved. The rhyme was perfect. This truely was an excellent poem. You have talent keep writing. ~Mel |