It sounds goog. your poem is good.

I liked this. Really deep and expressive. To me honestly you ended it nicely. I see nothing wrong with that ending I actually really enjoyed it. The whole poem was breathe taking. Sad yet held alot of sweet grace within each line. I'm glad I read yours poems! Keep up the great work. ~Mel

I really liked this poem.. its meaning spoke to me.

It was really deep, and you did end it quite well

It didn't end sad.. its inspiring.

I loved it

5/5

I like this poem because that is a problem with a lot of people 5/5