I always feel that a short poem packs more of a punch than a long-winded one. It's much easier to remember.

This has effortless grace, another very good poem.

~Pete.

This, I loved. Alot. It was definitly so amazing because for something so short you portrayed such deep emotions within it which held a grasp onto my heart and soul never letting it go. This was beautifully sad and I really loved it. Well done. Keep upthe great work. ~Mel