Comments : Vampire Lover

  • 16 years ago

    by cuddelyxbutxviciousXxX

    Awsome. i liked this very much, keep writing!
    ~kim

  • 16 years ago

    by Georgi

    Duhude!!! Ur vocab is INCREDIBLE!! I loved this its so dark that its beautiful :) I love uuuuu!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Great Fantasy!! You written it so well. Great diction and imagery.

    The tone in the poem was perfectly clear,

    Great well penned. 5/5