by taylor Nov 7, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
How dare u smile |
by Rachael
Wow babe, that is really touching. i love it alot. i love reading your poems.... but u should cheer up, a guy like that don't deserve you. :) |
Great poem, but using numbers to substitue for words is a little iffy, otherwise good write keep it up |
by taylor
Omg EXACTLY thank u soooo much for commenting!!!! |
by BabycakeS91
WOW I COULD RELATE TO THIS POEM VERY MUCH I LIKED THIS BOY BUT HE DIDNT LIKE ME I WAS SO HURT BUT AT THE END HE WAS THE ONE URTIN INSIDE |