I'm tired of this life
I'm tired of you
I'm tired of no love
What should I do?
I want to be like other couples
Hugging and kissing
I need you to be with me
So I can say I have nothing missing
Don't hold your love back
Give me all your trust
I would do anything for you
Even die if I must.
This poem is excellent. it is short but says everything it needs to. i can so relate to this poem. and u wrote it very cleverly. i noticed the ryme sceme u put in there. i made for excellent word flow. very good. 5/5
