A Broken Heart Lives On

The wings of our memories never fail to bring us to that place where our hearts lay bouyed. I liked this piece and think you have a wonderful poets pen with emotions that spill upon the page like the spots of sunshine that warm the forest floor where they provide a birth place for poems like yours. May you be true to your emotions, peace.

This was a good piece, but again I thought that the beginning was the strongest, and that the piece lost its power as it went on, which is actually rather common. I loved the first stanza, it was wonderful, perfect. I also really liked the second stanza.

Brad

Very nicely written rachel, great word choices. also very sad. 5/5

A broken heart lives on

^I liked the repetition in this poem. One of my favourite quotes is "Reality is wrong, dreams are for real" and when I read this it reminded me of it. Love lives on eternally in our dreams. A beautiful poem.

Take Care.

Good flow and rhyme...although very sad....

A broken heart lives on
Weathered from the past
Haunted by the memories
Of a love we thought would last

^I can so identify with this verse.....time does heal...