This is a really nice poem. I totally loved it. Great job!!! 5/5

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This was nicely written. Really good job, I really liked it. 5/5

Good poem.
Wonderfully written.
This poem was simple but beautiful.
Excellent use of imagery here and I loved the repetition. That's really effective.

5/5

-Shannon <3

The metaphors in this poem is the main concept. You took matching metaphors to show how much you love him and miss him. The choosing of words here is fantastic. Structure and flow go smoothly as well, great job 5/5

This poem was well thought out the repitition really created a grate flow with in the poem and fitted the subject very well.

This was just beautiful. I loved the style you chose to write the poem in .. it was flawless. I loved the imagery you created with your words ... it was wondeful. Well done *5/5*

This poem is so cute. i really liked reading this.. I do like how you tied nature into it. it makes him seem as if he is your everything from the air that you breathe to the things you see. I really liked it. Amazing Job

5/5

Not good enough what are you talking about. That was awesome!

Wow this is good!

I really loved this poem.

The way you metaphorically expressed your love for someone, using nature..

you used very vivid imagery too.

It was beautiful.

5/5

Beautiful that's all i have to say great job u really know how to present yourself

It wos ok.

It is nice. But it is not appriciating love not nature, Still I like to read this.
5/5

Wat a metaphor! to use nature for love? wow! really nice poem.. i fell in love with u for a second there.. =D

I loved the way you compared love to some of the most amazing things in the world. Funny how not even the most precious of things compares to the way love can make us feel. Great job once again 5/5 GG23

The title is really eye-catching. I can relate with the thing you wrote. Very well written poem. 5/5 from me!!

I love it its rele cute! <3

It's such a nice poem that i really liked

keep it up

good luck

her guardian

It was pretty good, I found it a tad repetitive though.
I could've done with saying the "i need you, I love you, I miss you" parts only once at the beginning of each stanza.
or maybe if the wording was changed a little...
Anywho, it was nice.

I loved this one...i like the style you used .. flow was great..i enjoyed reading this poem.

5/5