Complete my Soul

by Sad But True   Nov 7, 2007


I keep making changes; I need to be the best,
I need to be strong; I need to excel above the rest,
My heart will always love you and stay the same,
It's been shielded this time, and saved from the rain.

My soul needs passion, my soul needs you,
I need to know if you will love me too,
I close my eyes and see you smile,
I want to hold you close if only for awhile.

Sometimes I crave you not to be alone,
Sometimes my passions are turned into stone,
Sometimes my thoughts are turned to lust
Sometimes I think my heart will rust.

This I know without giving it a second thought,
Something I want to do, even if I get caught,
Gazing into your eyes makes my heart whole,
Your loving radiant smile completes my soul.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    Wow this was amazing. so beautiful. i loved every word. it was a lovely poem. a great flow, and a heartfelt piece of work. job well done. 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 17 years ago

    by Iola

    Is this woman worth your love?
    Your touch, your beautiful soul
    If her heart is incomplete
    Can she make your heart whole?

    What if her sun is shining in your eyes?
    And blinding you from her imperfection?
    Rocking, rolling and a thousand lies
    Cannot break this perfect connection...

    She is blessed, she surely is
    Can she heal your bleeding scars?
    Will she run or will she please?
    You’re the sky, she’s a thousand stars