This was, quite unique I must say. I liked it and at the start I wasn't so sure where this was going but in the end it was really dark and eerie though written with such a great meaning. I like how you write with short lines they are really deep. Overall a great read and i'm sure an even better write. Keep up the great work. ~Mel

Wow... I love dark poetry, and I must admit that this is completely mind- blowing piece, so unique and refreshing. Every line waked amounts of emotions inside me, and I can deeply relate to this piece. I like whole idea for the poem, it's so original!
Effective, powerful...
5/5 from me