by Gem Nov 7, 2007
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
The clouds are gathering, marring the moon |
by Midnight Sun
This is such an incredible piece...and true to your style. Your words always have the ability to cut through me Gem. It's amazing how talented you are. My fav lines were- |
by Tom Swart
Great words and a wonderful image penned. I really liked this piece. You have a good poets pen in your hands. |
An awesome poem packed with plenty of imagery!!! |
I liked this piece, as before, it was very well written. The wording was superb, as well as the rhymes and flow, blah, blah, you've heard it all before, lol. But the story and the words were what really made this piece great. I loved the first two lines of the last stanza, they were brillaintly written. I think my favorite stanza was the first one though. |
by Dark Secrets
Wow great poem... it gave me the chills, it actually has more meaning than the warewolf stuff... it gives you an idea that is about all criminals in general... good job |