You have made a good choice of words and the imagery and flow are very tight. |
by Jenni Marie
Gem, this poem is BEAUTIFUL. Just beautifully written. |
Quite chilling and very descriptive. |
by Cindy
Gem |
by Krzysztof J
Wuuuu scary :) i like it, reminds me of my lil pet werewoof on facebook :D I also kinda could relate this poem to me and that lil deamon that sometimes tries to run a muck in me lol :) another absolutly amazing poem miss :) love your work :)) 5/5 |
by Ingrid
Gem, |
by Gasttlee
That is very descriptive and imaginative. It feels so much like a story. 5/5 |
by Lucifer
That was really well written. there was a lot of thought put into it. good job. |
by debbylyn
Very good and descriptive....I enjoyed the dark scary feel to it......good flow and rhymes..... |
Nice, considering that i love werewolves, its a gr8 poem 4 me 2 read. i love the imagery that u used keep writing. |
by Allison
This was wonderful, I wish that I had your writing ability. You have such a way with words and a broader vocabulary. Keep up the good work. ^_^ *5/5* |
by geeeeee
Such an imaginative piece, and it told such a dark and descriptive story. To me it was unpredictable, it wasnt a poem that you could predict the ending within the first couple of lines. So it was good that it was more of a thriller. I do think though that someones been watching too many werewolf films lol :D |
by Kelly
'Nobody is safe whilst the moon is still full |
by Hebe
Very good poem. |
by SilentRebuke
Beautiful Gem! I think my own hair is still standing on end, your poem put me IN that room watching his grisly transformation. Absolutely brillant. I think my favorite couple of lines were: |
by Dark Secrets
Wow great poem... it gave me the chills, it actually has more meaning than the warewolf stuff... it gives you an idea that is about all criminals in general... good job |
I liked this piece, as before, it was very well written. The wording was superb, as well as the rhymes and flow, blah, blah, you've heard it all before, lol. But the story and the words were what really made this piece great. I loved the first two lines of the last stanza, they were brillaintly written. I think my favorite stanza was the first one though. |
An awesome poem packed with plenty of imagery!!! |
by Tom Swart
Great words and a wonderful image penned. I really liked this piece. You have a good poets pen in your hands. |
by Midnight Sun
This is such an incredible piece...and true to your style. Your words always have the ability to cut through me Gem. It's amazing how talented you are. My fav lines were- |