Beneath the stars (Monchielle)

This is an amazing piece! the last stanza is so beautiful, especially the line "Hoping dawn stays away"

great work, once again!
peace
shobhana

This is the second Monchielle I have read. I have to say that I really like this style of poetry. Yours flowed effortlessly and the wording was sublime. The images you have created are beautiful. A lovely piece.

Take Care.

I've fallen in love with this form....thanks so much for posting it. This is a lovely and romantic poem.....you can't go wrong with rose petals....beautiful!

Steve,

This truly is a very romantic poem, you did great!

5/5 Ingrid

Steve
This is a wonderful piece you have penned. You can feel the longing and passion in your words.

Rose petals in the wind (A)
Hoping dawn stays away (k)
This special night is ours (l)
Within my arms you sleep (m)
Here underneath the stars (l)

This paints such a loving vision.
Excellent job my friend.
Love Cindy