Comments : Dream Desires (Collab)

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    I love this poem, great collab you two... I believe that many people can relate to this.
    Excellently written, entertaining, descriptive, with good rhymes and flow.
    Truly fantastic collab.

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Haha, Yeah it was a blast writing this poem I had so much fun. And I think the meaning behind it was just so great <3

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    Ha, really nice poem .. should I really have expected anything less than such a fun poem from you two?

    You capture so much about our society today (whether deliberatly or not) people are not only fascinated by the stars they see on tv, but they're infatuated with them.

    It's a truly great collab when you can't tell who wrote which parts - exactly as it is here .. both of your styles blend very nicely together in this piece.

    I vote not by a number but with a word .. Encore!

    If you decide to do another together, I'll be ready and waiting.

    ~Pete.

  • 16 years ago

    by Spirit

    Ha Ha Ha HA HA HA HA AHHHHHHHHHHhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!

    well one thing is for sure you can write a good tummy tickler

    thanks that all i have to say.
    :~)Sam Mayo
    Ps if you ever saw DINOTOPIA he is in there to

  • 16 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    Lmao, a really entertaining poem
    i had fun reading it xD

    You described a lot, nice job

  • 16 years ago

    by debbylyn

    Really cute collab....especially since Prison Break is one of my fav shows!

    You have meshed styles very well and created a cute and entertaining piece that I'm sure we can all relate to with our celebrity fascinations! Great job! Take care, Debbie

  • 16 years ago

    by azii

    Haha best funny poem I ever read GREAT job! It was fantastic
    keep i tup

  • 16 years ago

    by Lil Love Angel

    I love this poem! It's great!
    And I agree about the show;)