Comments : Sad face

  • 17 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    Like this, It's cute =]
    5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by I Seem to be the Heartless

    GREAT poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    Tense though. If you're using past stick to past: "But was afraid that you WOULD get mad."
    And 1 spelling: "Damn" not "dam"

    Fantastic work!

    Josie