This is the game of love

I like how you capture the true effects of poker and combine it with those of love. you win and you lose, in this case the character lost. beautifully written. 5/5 !props!

Comparing love to a game is quite a big cliche. Maybe you could try something else to compare it to. Be unique. Everyone likes unique-ness. :]

I think you need to capitalize all your i's. It'll make the poem more neat and tidy.

So I think this is about a girl who always "gambles" with her love life, and ends up making a mistake [probably a big one] and "loses it all". She loses the one she loves. It's pretty easy to understand [or so I think so. It may be about something totally different]. Very relatable. Try adding some more emotions though. More imagrey. Tell a story of how you lost a "game" or something. Just some suggestions. :]

Great job.

Keep writing!
Cayce

You created your own unique way of revealing your idea about love which happened to be true at times.. i love the thoughts that you used, the ambaince and the metaphors.. although the sad emotion is still there, i don't know but for me the feeling isn't that powerful

Game of love :(
Yeah, I always lose.

This one's good.
Nice hun (:

xxx.

Your welcome :]