I like it =)
good way of expressing the sense of love

I thought this was a perfect way of showing left love ummm oh my gosh thaxs soooo much for the comment you gave me ive been waiting for someone to comment one of my new poems i was so sad because i had lost my father and no one wanted to comment & at least say that they felt sorry for me but you put a smile to my face and a light to my poem thanks a lot..it was REALLY true story all of it was true

Your welcome :]

Game of love :(
Yeah, I always lose.

This one's good.
Nice hun (:

xxx.

You created your own unique way of revealing your idea about love which happened to be true at times.. i love the thoughts that you used, the ambaince and the metaphors.. although the sad emotion is still there, i don't know but for me the feeling isn't that powerful

Comparing love to a game is quite a big cliche. Maybe you could try something else to compare it to. Be unique. Everyone likes unique-ness. :]

I think you need to capitalize all your i's. It'll make the poem more neat and tidy.

So I think this is about a girl who always "gambles" with her love life, and ends up making a mistake [probably a big one] and "loses it all". She loses the one she loves. It's pretty easy to understand [or so I think so. It may be about something totally different]. Very relatable. Try adding some more emotions though. More imagrey. Tell a story of how you lost a "game" or something. Just some suggestions. :]

Great job.

Keep writing!
Cayce

I like how you capture the true effects of poker and combine it with those of love. you win and you lose, in this case the character lost. beautifully written. 5/5 !props!