My body and my mind

by Gizmo   Nov 7, 2007


My eyes will not let me see you through the tears,
and my feet run a mile when your near,
my ears will not let me hear your excuse anymore,
& my mouth refuses to answer you at all.

my mind it tells you i hate you,
and my hand pulls away from yours when you touch me,
my fingertips trace the marks that you left,
and my lips refuse to miss your kiss.

my body just does not care for you anymore,
you have destroyed it way too much,
my head tells me to walk away from you forever,

but my heart just will not give you up
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  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Great job dude! Lovin the original idea about body and mind reacting to someone. Thanks for your comment btw and i will send you a pm sometime to exchange thoughts if your down with it. Peace out and keep up the unique work.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jaymes Haze

    Oh wow, from the first line it reminds me of my "Heart and Mind" poem.

    Obviously this is a good one.
    I can't think of much to improve on this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxXcrystalXcontagiousXxX

    Wow it sounds like my relationship now.
    Thats was really good 5/5 it was great wording and rymes not to much not to little

  • 16 years ago

    by Alvaro

    This poem is swift! loved it reminded me of everyday life how one contradicts itself making confusion on a bigger level, for the poem i gave it a 5 and it was great write orginal

  • 16 years ago

    by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX

    A lot of people can relate to this poem. I like how the words DONT rhyme. they work almost magically with the poem so they dont have to. i love how you leave one sentence hanging off of the poem to tie everything in. beautifully written. 5/5 !props!

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