Wow great poem and I understand it so well been there and still am keep it up and 5/5

Thank you

Wowzerz I really liked this poem I related to it so much keep it up good job

I liked this, it's very well written. =] 5/5

Omg.... This poem REALLY spoke to me. I know what you mean. I've fallen into this mindset so much. It's not fun. Your heart still yearns for the happy past memories, but your logical side says no. It's a very hard part in life to deal with this!! I hope you feel better ^____^

Very nicely written.. great job!

This reminds me of a woman beaten by her husband/boyfriend, but still loves him. Her mind wants to leave him so bad, and she knows she needs to leave, but she can't because she's in love, and maybe, just maybe she thinks things will get better. [which probably won't happen]. You really portrayed the image very well. It's quite easy to understand what this is about. Straight-forward.

"My eyes will not let me see you through the tears,
and my feet run a mile when your near,"

^^ "your" should be "you're".

I think you should capitalize your I's, and the beginning of the sentences. It would just look neater, and be more appealing to the reader.

Other than that, I really liked the poem, and the topic. Well done!

Keep writing!
Cayce

I find this poem so easy to relate too another great write nice work - raindrops 5/5

A lot of people can relate to this poem. I like how the words DONT rhyme. they work almost magically with the poem so they dont have to. i love how you leave one sentence hanging off of the poem to tie everything in. beautifully written. 5/5 !props!

This poem is swift! loved it reminded me of everyday life how one contradicts itself making confusion on a bigger level, for the poem i gave it a 5 and it was great write orginal

Wow it sounds like my relationship now.
Thats was really good 5/5 it was great wording and rymes not to much not to little

Oh wow, from the first line it reminds me of my "Heart and Mind" poem.

Obviously this is a good one.
I can't think of much to improve on this one.

Great job dude! Lovin the original idea about body and mind reacting to someone. Thanks for your comment btw and i will send you a pm sometime to exchange thoughts if your down with it. Peace out and keep up the unique work.