Aww this is so sweet!! I know how you feel. As your twin I share your emotion, hopes, fears, dreams, and your pain! (((Hugs)))

I picked my favorite part...

I am trusting you to love me
As much as I love you
I am giving you the key to my heart,
Can I have yours too?

Beautifully written!! U know I'm a fan!

Its a sweet poem, i like it. Keep it up!! 5/6

Its a sweet poem, i like it. Keep it up!! 5/6

Wow, the expressing of emotions was very strong here. I could feel myself feeling what you described in this poem, I truly could get into it. The rhyming and structure are great, keep it up 5/5

"And to be able so stay with you"

To be able TO stay?

"Because I don't know what I would do
If we had to ever part"

^^I thought the flow was shaky on that, maybe try something like:
Really don't know what I'd do
If we were to ever part?

"You have to fine the key"

^^Find?

Other than that, I love this piece.

Despite being a little long, you easily held my interest throughout the piece and the emotion and depth you portray is so beautifully done that at times it's a little overwhelming, almost like the reader can -feel- everything that you are describing.

I adore the ending stanza, I found it to be incredibly sweet and moving, and a perfect way to wrap up the piece.

Amazin

This is amazing 5/5 but you deserve more than 5

True Poets always use their poetic licence when necessary. YOU have the ability to blend words poetically. LOVE YOUR POEM. it is filled with love. tc

That is the cutest poem i have ever read, seriously it makes me think of the guy that i love too, and distance has kept us apart.. and it's exactly how i feel, i can really relate to this poem ..
i loved your choice of words and how you would rhyme the first and the third line of each stanza..
take care x

Wow this is long but good. very detailed and not missing a beat. i liked this alot. you expressed your love in a unique way and things that is very interesting. well wonderful poem keep writing

Very beautiful poem. The title drew me to read this one. The last stanza was too damn perfect. What else can I say. It's 5/5

Every single one of your poems is awesome. Thanks for sharing yourself. Your very enjoyable