by Barry
Absolutely fantastic, wonderful, one of you best poems.......especially the last stanza |
by Cindy
Debbie |
This is beautiful. Your words have always struck me so hard....i love your selection of words as they simply add the spice. |
Ohhhh... beautiful, breathtakingly beautiful from the beginning to the end. This is one of the best love poems I've read in a while... I love every stanza, you created such captivating and enchanting atmosphere and imagery. Whole piece is very original too, filled with flawlessly described emotions. |
Bravo! You have done wonders using the form whilst keeping the flow tight and the imagery just right from begining to end. |
by Ingrid
Very deep, touching and moving piece. You did a great job on the format, Debbie! |
by Pete
Wonderful, wonderful imagery used here. Right from the start you set the atmosphere for the reader. |
by Jenni Marie
Ohhh how I love this. |
by geeeeee
After I read your poem, because I had never heard of a Monchielle I decided to write my own. So thanks for bringing this poetry style to my attention. This looks like it was written effortlessly and your word choice is superb. If only my poem had turned out to be anywhere near as great as yours. |
by Polaroid
Wow this was really great, keep it up, |
This poem was wonderfully amazing and beautiful. i loved reading it, it kept me hooked to the very last word. it is an amazing piece, i cant wait to read more from you. 5*5 |
by Elapsed
A brilliant, warm and heartfelt poem. An absolute joy to read. |
by Ashley Ann
I love this poem! nice imagery, format, and subject. 5/5 |
by Rachel RTVW
This poem is a metaphorical masterpiece. Many different interpretations could arise from this one. The flow, imagery, structure of the form and word choice are all flawless. Excellent work! |