Lost A Friend.

by DeathlyAmore   Nov 7, 2007


I lost a friend, one of my best,
Guilty my heart pounds impulsively.
I lost a friend, my tears fall.
I lost a friend, so... so bitterly.

Gone forever she no longer speaks to me,
Turning her head & her back I now see.
Running to her shoulder she just walks away,
In her eyes I see she no longer wants me.

A horrible friend I have become,
As guilt overpowers this horrible soul.
& my knees shake in depression as it mourns,
Lamenting she whom helped me be whole.

Always there for me this friend was,
& I screwed up, I want to take it back.
Please stop crying I can't see you this way!!!!
PLEASE stop crying... I'm sorry,
So sorry...

[Personal Message: This is toward a female friend, one of my very close ones, I made this poem five minutes later after this tragedy, while all my emotions were still fresh in my mind.

I pray to God she can hear my cries, that she may forgive me. I can't even look at her in school anymore... I feel so guilty... I hope she forgives me... I hope...]

Be safe *Arecely.*
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_[Sam]

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  • 16 years ago

    by JAZMIN

    Wow!! very strong emotions!!
    stay strong!

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Yes,i hope she forgives you too,ur emotion in this is really strong!

  • 16 years ago

    by Simple Sensation

    Well after reading this I really hope your friend does infact hear your cry for forgiveness. I could feel the emotion when I read the poem. I could feel the remorse your feeling. And I can personally relate to it. I think we all can at some point in our lives. The flow of the poem was good overall though it ddi get a little sketchy towards the end. It has a good strong rhyme scheme. Again the emotion and your remorse is really the strongest part of this poem. Punctuation could use some improvement. It just seemed so strict. Keep writing and I hope she does forgive you. Show her the poem?

  • 16 years ago

    by Chemically Corrupted

    I love this poem! I can relate to this. My best friend just left and blamed everything on me and now, no matter what, I feel guilty.

  • 16 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Same, losing a friend is such a horrible feeling, I've had a couple turn their backs on me for decisions I've mad ein my past and its horrible, great poem and good luck I hope she forgives you.

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