I hope she forgives you too.

i know how it feels to loose a friend

Same, losing a friend is such a horrible feeling, I've had a couple turn their backs on me for decisions I've mad ein my past and its horrible, great poem and good luck I hope she forgives you.

I love this poem! I can relate to this. My best friend just left and blamed everything on me and now, no matter what, I feel guilty.

Well after reading this I really hope your friend does infact hear your cry for forgiveness. I could feel the emotion when I read the poem. I could feel the remorse your feeling. And I can personally relate to it. I think we all can at some point in our lives. The flow of the poem was good overall though it ddi get a little sketchy towards the end. It has a good strong rhyme scheme. Again the emotion and your remorse is really the strongest part of this poem. Punctuation could use some improvement. It just seemed so strict. Keep writing and I hope she does forgive you. Show her the poem?

Yes,i hope she forgives you too,ur emotion in this is really strong!

Wow!! very strong emotions!!
stay strong!