Comments : Trapped inside my mind

  • 16 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is a great poem. I'm sorry i didn't mean to offend you but i'm just trying to get people to stop ya know? I don't want anyone dieing because of that. Yeah i said get over it but i wasn't trying to bully no one or pick on no one. I was just trying to help people realize it is another way to get rid of pain than just doing that...

  • 16 years ago

    by hadia

    I like the way you explained everything,
    great poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mister 47

    Great one , keep wirteing those feeligns

  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    A great write, very heartfelt and deep i loved it. you have a great talent. keep up the nice work! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Needer of You

    Nice one! Keep on pouring out your feelings, it feels much better than squinging it in