Wow....this poem is really filled with so much emotions and feeling...its very powerful, its sad but very very heartfelt. great job Alliey.

Wow really powerful write
i loved it
keep it up!

Love it alot
5/5

Wow..so much grief and emotion put into this, it was absolutly awsum!!!....great job!!!!
***aLy***
5/5

This is a very sad powerfull powem..if you can wright this then you ARE stronger than anyone..
10/5

I love this poem i can so relate to it..great job 5/5

This one is excellent good flow good
rhyming easy to read and feel 5/5

A very deep and powerful write. i could feel the emotions i every line as i read. this poem is the type of poem many others are able to relate to, and poems like these are the best to read. job well done. 5/5.

-Ashlei.