Ben
excellent piece. The imagery and word choices are fantastic.

Home of countless sorrows
Time to meet our maker for victory and sorrows toll
How many victories have you snatched from jaws of sorrows hold.

I love the ending to this piece.
Love Cindy

I loved the wording of this piece the whole way through....

"Home of countless sorrows
Death now beckons with a celestial call.
For told journey for the souls of one and all."

This Stanza struck home for me.. very sad though well expressed. Great job!