Amazing, full of emotion, loved it, great piece keep it up. |
I know how you feel, I wrote a few poems like this. I have a boy that I love with all my heart and yet we aren't togther, though he loves me as well. I hope everything works out for you. You wrote a amazing poem. Great job 5/5 |
by June
A beautiful write ,I enjoyed the read from start to finish but if had to be this bit that really stuck as it is just how I feel , |
by Melly
Very sweet it made me cry. |
Very beautiful poem and touching yet very sad too |
This is a very good poem , full of emotions that go deep into the heart, well writen and very sad, I know how it is to love someone and not be with them, great job, keep it up , your friend , Tracy d (-_-)~~~~~~~~5 |