What if?

by Jessica Evelyn Maxwell   Nov 8, 2007


What if tonight
i was to end my life
what if tonight
i disappeared out of sight

what if i took
a knife to my throat
tied a noose
and began to choke

cut my wrist
and watched them bleed
do me a favor
and let me leave

what if i gave up
and decided to leave
took some pills
so i wouldnt breathe

what if i found a cliff
and jumped off
smashed a bullet
through my skull

i hate life
so why should i live
bleeding out
breathing in

standing here
saying goodbye
secret question
i wonder why

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  • 11 years ago

    by carl

    Awesome! i like stuff from the 'shadow side' lol
    thanks for your comments its only taken me 6 years to get back to you , i forgot about this site as well.

  • 17 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    Quite a nice write,
    Really morbid though..

    Quite nice overall 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by xXxSurrenderToMyWrathxXx

    This is really great. i feel ur emotions. try to comment some of my work

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow,
    this is nicely written great poem that shows great emotions
    keep up the great work and a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it

  • 17 years ago

    by mary oneson

    Wow,
    this is the darkest poem
    ive read from you so far

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