This is very deep,
amazingly written
however did you come up with this

This is a awesome write and a wonderful thought. May peace and joy fill your heart eacha nd everyday.

sadaddy

Lovely poem,
The meaning behind this was really tells a lot.
Its so true though..
You expressed what you thought quite well
5/5

I really like it!!!! ... its wat i think about all the time but i suck at expressing my deepest thoughts ... i love how u write ... keep up the awesome work!!!

You're very astute for someone so young , took me 40 years to realise the world is shit and we dont have to put up with it.