Comments : I'll show you

  • 17 years ago

    by Indian Comma Bean

    Nice job, good flow, keep it up

  • 17 years ago

    by Alicia Jane

    Aww iits cutee
    =] realy nicee
    xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nigel Oliver

    Nice poem xD

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    Wow,
    this is nicely written great poem that shows great emotions
    keep up the great work and a 5/5 from me as you truly deserve it