Well, that was the first poem i read ny friends as I have this time to do so & lets hasten to say that its fantastic & i should tell you that the way you expressed it- it shows you have a talent and ur used in what you are doing while i haven't mention the content, that a fundamental part of a poem and yours is phenominal and its nicely expressed, while I like this poem as the whole-i like this the most ''When the feeling of accomplishment comes after millions of failures'' you dedicated this poem to your lover but the brave man can take this talking line. Beautiful poem.

Nice flow, u seem to really express your love