This is a really good combo of a reflexive poem and a, well i forget what it's called but one that looks back at a period of time. i really like it. good job.

Wow.
That was amazing. :) Truly fantastic.

"I thought I needed pain,
when my soul felt so numb,
eyes focused on the beating vein,
beating, beating like a violet drum."
^ Love love love those lines. :P
Overall: 5.5 Great job.

-- Stephanie <3

That was very well written. It truly was. I can relate to this alot, though I'm not out of the pain (who ever is?) I know that I can pull through sometimes and others I can't. It depends.

"I thought I needed pain,
when my soul felt so numb,"

My Favorite Lines Hun. Honestly. ^^ I'm mad i didn't get to actually read this before.

With Much Love,
-Ally