by Sweet lig Nov 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
desired love
You're so nice and kind |
Very powerful poem. If I'm not careful I could live this one out because I have someone who could have very well have written this for me. Great poem but it kinda made me sad because of what I am going through. |
by Allison
5/5 |
by Melpomene
I really liked the meaning and story portrayed behind this though to me all you need to work on is your flow to smoothe things out. Other then that an emotional and heart braking write which I'm sure you poured out your deepest sincerity within it. An enjoyable read. Keep writing. ~Mel |
by Abu3li
Ok |
by Men
Good poem however there were a couple of mistakes with your grammar and also the flow was not quite perfect, otherwise it was ofcourse like all of your other poems extrememly emotional. |