"You're so nice and kind
I'm glad you love me at my worst
And you admit with my best"

These lines started a flawless flow through out your poem. They made everything else come together. 5/5

Wow this is pretty good. i like the word choice and the way you portrayed the characters in this one. it has a lot of feeling behind it. good job 5/5

Inspiring. veryyyy. i can relate to it.
pinay? :D

Ok I found the emothion in this piece strong however the were some grammer mistakes and althought it flowed at the begining it did not last through out the entire poem.

This was a heartbreaking story. I know what it feels like not to return love to someone that loves you. It is so hard but you can't force yourself to love someone you don't. Well done *5/5*

I had a boyfriend who was still completly hooked on me.. he hates me now. and ii'm in love with someone else. i thnk he's so much better without me. .. You do a great job at telling your story. I reallly liked this part:

What should I do just to leave me?
But I think you wont give up
Till you cant get my heart

I can relate this to my life,'

excellent

5/5

You have a lot of emotion in this poem but i think that with the three lines that i just kept getting cut off with every stanza. But over all good job

I really liked this poem,

How you expressed how you felt about someone that loves you is expressing his love for you, but you not loving him back.

"I might hurt your feelings
And breaks all your dream
But I cant fake my heart"

I liked that stanza

expressing how you feel and telling he what he should do because, you can't fake your heart..

This poem spoke deeply to me.
you expressed yourself really well

I wish I won't get a poem like this from the one I love... Although it's tough meaning, the emotions you put there seem real and harsh. I hope the one you dedicated this song to won't take it hard. Nice work 5/5

Aww. That is really sad. But good emotion in this peice. I could feel your sorrow for him in your words. Great job!
5/5

Amber..

Rally meaningful your words are sincere and strong. another great job to you 5/5 all the way. You are a really great writer keep it up.

laura

I think thats all that anybody wants out of life, is to just be loved unconditionally for who they are. I'm glad you were honest with not only him, but yourself as well. Excellent job 5/5 GG23

This is very great poem. You know how to write, the story is really amazing. I absolutely love this stanza

Despite the bad things Ive done to you
The words Ive said seem hurts you, but;
You still strong showing your love

Well done. You deserve 5/5!!!

Wow this poem relates to me i have a guy thats cares for me but i love sum one else!!! great job!!!

Good poem however there were a couple of mistakes with your grammar and also the flow was not quite perfect, otherwise it was ofcourse like all of your other poems extrememly emotional.

Ok

done

I really liked the meaning and story portrayed behind this though to me all you need to work on is your flow to smoothe things out. Other then that an emotional and heart braking write which I'm sure you poured out your deepest sincerity within it. An enjoyable read. Keep writing. ~Mel

5/5

It was a great poem. The only thing I would change is a very spelling errors that you had. But the message conveyed in the poem was fabulous! Keep it up! =]

Very powerful poem. If I'm not careful I could live this one out because I have someone who could have very well have written this for me. Great poem but it kinda made me sad because of what I am going through.