Yep yep, me likes it very much ^^ erg goed geschreven ;)

Well,, this is a good one.
Very sweet and stuff..
Like the wordchoice..
Take care

This is a really good poem. but the "dearest, my love" sounds a bit off to me, but it might just be me. apart from that one little bit i really liked the poem. 5/5

Kalee