Comments : Realization

  • 17 years ago

    by Blissful

    I loved the pace you created here with your words. It was upbeat and it all flowed perfectly.

    "I always loved you, adn I always will,"
    ^I think you mean "and"

    Great job. *5/5*

  • 17 years ago

    by denita

    That was a great poem good job