I loved this poem >.<

"If you come and be my love,
I'll quiet down and be your dove.
I'd represent everything good,
If only you come and love me as only you could. "
^favorite stanza :D

keep it up

I liked how you expressed your emotions here but the poem did not flow well.

"I am will you show you all."
^I don't get it..

Overall .. good job *4/5*

Great work! lovely poem full of emotion and feelings! i love it!! keep up the great work! ;D

Hehe it was great! tell me if u ever want sumthing commented cuz i will!