by Romantic Lover Nov 8, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
Here's a story of a girl who is madly in love |
by Jenni Marie
This is so beautiful. |
by Melpomene
I loved this piece also alot. You write really well with long lines and I always like reading poems which have long lines and are pulled off nicely. The story behind this piece was interesting. Portrayed nicely. Really deep and thoughtful. A powerful piece which I enjoyed reading alot. Well done. ~Mel |
by Ashley
I LOVE IT 5/5 very well done keep it up |
Now this poem flowed very well. I loved the rhyming in this poem and it was beautifully written. This can really relate to me. Great write. 5/5 |
by Nowhere Man
It's a classic one... I really like the expressions you put in there... your poems are awesome... -) |