Its beautiful, very heartfelt and powerful expressions.
Well done.

Best wishes
chavii.

It's a classic one... I really like the expressions you put in there... your poems are awesome... -)

Now this poem flowed very well. I loved the rhyming in this poem and it was beautifully written. This can really relate to me. Great write. 5/5

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I LOVE IT 5/5 very well done keep it up

I loved this piece also alot. You write really well with long lines and I always like reading poems which have long lines and are pulled off nicely. The story behind this piece was interesting. Portrayed nicely. Really deep and thoughtful. A powerful piece which I enjoyed reading alot. Well done. ~Mel

This is so beautiful.

Very heartfelt and moving, and the opening stanza immedieately made me want to continue reading, and from there on it just gets better and better throughout the piece.

I thought flow was good for the most part, but was off in just a couple places, but your beautiful imagery certainly makes up for that.

On the whole, I love this, I found it to be very sweet and touching.